tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091712865176242504.post1319773673069020410..comments2022-01-25T04:26:38.985+00:00Comments on Next Big Book Thing: Massimo Marino's #WriteTip on Telling vs. Showing @Massim0Marin0 #amwriting #amreading Melodyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15225974825383039911noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091712865176242504.post-70323268391755113072014-03-08T15:10:12.798+00:002014-03-08T15:10:12.798+00:00Good article. Often books do contain too much desc...Good article. Often books do contain too much descriptive language. I am prompted to review what I have written to look for improvements. As a writer it is a good reminder to allow the reader to be immersed in the story using their own imagination. Thanks Massimo.Jim Murdochhttp://jmurdoch.comnoreply@blogger.com